tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post4814088416692776059..comments2024-03-12T13:52:44.046-07:00Comments on IN ITS TIME: FICTION | THAT QUESTION.Kikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-70217165503572814942014-01-28T02:05:09.494-08:002014-01-28T02:05:09.494-08:00Hi there! I know this is kinda off topic but I'...Hi there! I know this is kinda off topic but I'd figured I'd ask.<br /><br />Would you be interested in trading links with my blog?<br />My blog covers a lot of interesting and helpful posts just like yours and I feel we could greatly benefit from each other. And also, I think you'll love my recent blog post titled <a href="http://danieluyi.com/making-excuses-how-it-affects-your-life-and-what-to-do/" rel="nofollow"><b>Making Excuses: How It Affects Your Life And What To Do</b></a><br /><br />I'm hoping to hear from you too and quickly, you've got a great blog here.<br /><br />Daniel.Daniel Efosa Uyihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07207528724158754856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-8989408761686169982014-01-27T20:52:21.322-08:002014-01-27T20:52:21.322-08:00Haha, well, if I'm honest, I originally intend...Haha, well, if I'm honest, I originally intended for this story to stand alone since I'm terrible at finishing stories. Buuut, after I read everyone's feedback, I guess there will be a continuation? We shall see! :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-91442277876588984802014-01-27T19:14:34.962-08:002014-01-27T19:14:34.962-08:00please tell me there is a continuation...please tell me there is a continuation...Madison Russhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10010147478031425203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-33339625123164147452014-01-27T17:27:25.755-08:002014-01-27T17:27:25.755-08:00Aw, thanks! I definitely wrote this post intending...Aw, thanks! I definitely wrote this post intending on making it gritty and emotional and made the guy the annoying 'bad' guy by incorporating a few of my pet peeves, too (the cell phone during face-to-face conversations for starters!). Anyway, I want to know more of it, too! Now I just need some time to write. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-36904683350728418562014-01-27T17:26:08.878-08:002014-01-27T17:26:08.878-08:00Aw, thank you! I have a terrible habit of starting...Aw, thank you! I have a terrible habit of starting fiction pieces and never finishing them, but I'm a little intrigued by this couple and their story, too. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-30579502262166551782014-01-27T17:25:30.551-08:002014-01-27T17:25:30.551-08:00Aw, thanks Kaysie! The first time I published a li...Aw, thanks Kaysie! The first time I published a little fiction, that's exactly how I felt. Very afraid, very unsure, and very worried about people's reactions. It helps to have such a kind and encouraging readership and great friends like you! :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-31977138620895238702014-01-27T17:24:43.576-08:002014-01-27T17:24:43.576-08:00Aw, thank you!!! I love it when people use caps in...Aw, thank you!!! I love it when people use caps in comments (well, not always, but in cases like this, it's definitely welcome!). Thank you so much! :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-40256169587534452062014-01-27T17:24:00.290-08:002014-01-27T17:24:00.290-08:00Thank you so much, Robyn! It means a lot to get en...Thank you so much, Robyn! It means a lot to get encouragement on my writing, because it's one of those things that I am not very confident in yet. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-54413937166920899042014-01-27T17:23:21.478-08:002014-01-27T17:23:21.478-08:00Thanks, Susanne! That means a lot! I cannot wait t...Thanks, Susanne! That means a lot! I cannot wait to write more now. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-77891918064165598542014-01-27T17:22:19.597-08:002014-01-27T17:22:19.597-08:00p.s. I totally forgot to tell you that I pretty mu...p.s. I totally forgot to tell you that I pretty much wrote those annoying "pick up the phone" thing because that's one of my biggest pet peeves ever, haha. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-5134880306117368132014-01-27T17:21:49.831-08:002014-01-27T17:21:49.831-08:00Snap. I'm so glad you loved this! You are seri...Snap. I'm so glad you loved this! You are seriously my mentor when it comes to writing (sorry the link didn't work, my bad!) so I'm so flattered you liked it. :)<br /><br />Also, I really wanted to write something gritty and emotional. I wrote this on a night when I was frustrated and had the itch to write so this break-up post was exactly what I needed. It was actually soothing to write, if that's not too weird to admit. I'm so glad I took your advice and just wrote!<br /><br />I actually wrote this post with NO intention to expand on it, but now that you mention it, I think it does have a lot of stories that I could write on it. Maybe I'll do just that! :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-11445381000965211102014-01-27T17:03:55.229-08:002014-01-27T17:03:55.229-08:00Thank you, Miranda! I've done it a few times o...Thank you, Miranda! I've done it a few times on the blog before but got stuck with my first story and then stopped because I got frustrated and lost with where I would take it. I also have a terrible habit of starting stories and then never finishing them (I have like ten stories saved on my computer that are 7 pages long and that's it, haha). :) <br /><br />Anyway, thank you so much! That means a lot coming from a talented writer like you!Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-2199831711479219902014-01-27T17:01:44.865-08:002014-01-27T17:01:44.865-08:00Thanks! And yes, I do plan to write more! I love i...Thanks! And yes, I do plan to write more! I love it and now I just need a spare moment (or maybe twenty?) to write some more. :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-30646991806174449402014-01-27T16:58:18.314-08:002014-01-27T16:58:18.314-08:00Aw, thanks! I actually didn't write this story...Aw, thanks! I actually didn't write this story with intentions of continuing it or deepening the story line, but I think I will now! And I had noooo idea you wrote fiction, too! I've done it a few times before on the old blog but I got stuck and stopped for a few months. Buuut, I'm hoping to keep it up and maybe try my hand and see where this story goes. <br /><br />As for you, please write something! Pretty please? :)Kikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-26545351116568231962014-01-27T13:52:41.768-08:002014-01-27T13:52:41.768-08:00this is so good, friend! i'm sad and mad and a...this is so good, friend! i'm sad and mad and all kinds of emotions over this. haha. great writing! i want to hear more of the story! Megan Klacknerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595923099910748290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-16362723434156194592014-01-27T12:53:12.119-08:002014-01-27T12:53:12.119-08:00this is so good girl!
Shoot!
You are one talented...this is so good girl! <br />Shoot!<br />You are one talented writer! <br />I so want to hear more :) Britneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09016552277725823922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-31176228286675399392014-01-27T08:28:05.351-08:002014-01-27T08:28:05.351-08:00I think it is so brave of bloggers to write fictio...I think it is so brave of bloggers to write fiction excerpts on their blogs. SO GOOD Kaysie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12075514605943952553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-18805256671237837582014-01-27T08:17:21.391-08:002014-01-27T08:17:21.391-08:00THIS. IS. SO. GOOD.
I. WANT. MORE.
sorry for all ...THIS. IS. SO. GOOD. <br />I. WANT. MORE.<br />sorry for all caps, but it's sooo good!a m b e rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13917973951634892022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-47698483668494758702014-01-27T08:08:18.190-08:002014-01-27T08:08:18.190-08:00you're such a good writer!! so intriguing!! :)...you're such a good writer!! so intriguing!! :)Robyn Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10588316737199045936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-51675383062650892402014-01-27T07:35:58.472-08:002014-01-27T07:35:58.472-08:00This is soo good! Keep it up!This is soo good! Keep it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-28476126459728244302014-01-27T07:33:59.688-08:002014-01-27T07:33:59.688-08:00this right here "We were sitting so close and...this right here "We were sitting so close and yet our conversation was bringing us farther and farther away." <- PERFECTION. definitely captured my attention after that line. <br />snap.<br />girl snap.<br />so much emotion here - i am pissed at this dude to pull out his PHONE and avoid the topic and let HER be the one to end things - just by asking....ooooooooooooooooooooooo d-bag! <br />:)<br />so needless to say, this was awesome, i'm glad you didn't over think it, and you just let it fly.<br />i could definitely see a series out of this one. add in some back story posts, his side of things, what all is happening, the afer effects, the ripples in the relationship...man so many awesome options! Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06015897070916345752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-66833844917621391702014-01-27T05:31:11.496-08:002014-01-27T05:31:11.496-08:00Kiki, this is AWESOME! I love that you are trying ...Kiki, this is AWESOME! I love that you are trying your hand at fiction! :) <br /><br />Must have more!Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02094352061562462481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-63933848436522082062014-01-27T04:45:26.543-08:002014-01-27T04:45:26.543-08:00Very cool! And very intriguing! Do more!!!Very cool! And very intriguing! Do more!!!Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15825978787233477436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-31259149495342618922014-01-27T04:10:08.962-08:002014-01-27T04:10:08.962-08:00Girl, I LOVE your writing style! This story defini...Girl, I LOVE your writing style! This story definitely raises some questions and makes me want to know more, which is such a great trait for a story to have! Great job :)<br /><br />PS- another reason we're totally twins: i've always loved writing little fictional stories and still do once and a while! I should try my hand at it again :)Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11712255986329678684noreply@blogger.com