tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post5036761579133225517..comments2024-03-12T13:52:44.046-07:00Comments on IN ITS TIME: FICTION | TRAVELS, PART THREE. Kikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09995732867958680921noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-48747467009145162862014-10-01T21:19:35.763-07:002014-10-01T21:19:35.763-07:00Haha, I know, right? I was debating on what I want...Haha, I know, right? I was debating on what I wanted Liza to say and when I thought about that one, I thought of all of the different story lines and events that could come and it oddly enough made me more excited about this fictional piece. We'll see where it heads next!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-27262113097079558222014-10-01T18:50:48.533-07:002014-10-01T18:50:48.533-07:00What?! I was definitely NOT expecting that last li...What?! I was definitely NOT expecting that last line to come out of her mouth. haha This is soo good! Keep going, keep going!! :)Jess Elysehttp://polishedarrow.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-80366889929952513982014-09-25T07:23:50.791-07:002014-09-25T07:23:50.791-07:00I know, right? I really wanted to twist the plot ...I know, right? I really wanted to twist the plot and change up a typical (or potentially too boring/over-used) story line. We'll see where it takes me!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-79268092513437709602014-09-25T07:23:10.883-07:002014-09-25T07:23:10.883-07:00No worries, I definitely didn't read it as boa...No worries, I definitely didn't read it as boasting! :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-25659418365069647262014-09-25T06:03:42.911-07:002014-09-25T06:03:42.911-07:00:) :) :) :) talent knows talent i guess ;) hahahah...:) :) :) :) talent knows talent i guess ;) hahahaha<br />that sounded like boasting - i promise it wasn't!Amyhttp://www.takingstepshome.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-30292727662065908492014-09-25T06:03:15.169-07:002014-09-25T06:03:15.169-07:00ohhhh goodness! ahhh i just don't know what to...ohhhh goodness! ahhh i just don't know what to feeeeellll so many feels ahahhahah that is such a good twist! (and i never know what i'm going to do haha)Amyhttp://www.takingstepshome.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-18736759275614008782014-09-24T20:37:26.658-07:002014-09-24T20:37:26.658-07:00Um, yes? I never really thought of it being a litt...Um, yes? I never really thought of it being a little lie to distance him from Liza at all. Although, I do kinda like that. But yeah, she's really pregnant. I've always wanted to write that into a story of mine but haven't done so until now. We'll see what happens next! Haha, I actually have NO idea what to do (again). :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-62267400271835178182014-09-24T20:36:05.170-07:002014-09-24T20:36:05.170-07:00Sweet, maybe, but definitely just HONEST. Seriousl...Sweet, maybe, but definitely just HONEST. Seriously, you have such a knack for writing! <br /><br /><br />And thank you so much. I say this all the time, but it really does mean a lot coming from you!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-16611281661859563242014-09-24T20:32:20.063-07:002014-09-24T20:32:20.063-07:00I never really thought of turning him into a chara...I never really thought of turning him into a character, but we'll see if he makes a bigger appearance! I'll definitely keep that in mind!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-47627175052042314702014-09-24T17:48:46.977-07:002014-09-24T17:48:46.977-07:00Write! Write! Write! ;)
I definitely think the ol...Write! Write! Write! ;)<br /><br />I definitely think the old guy needs a name and a major role to play...but it IS your story, so that's all I'll say. <br />~ Victoria<br /><br />www.myjourneyforhim.blogspot.comVictoriahttp://myjourneyforhim.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-53294568479679665902014-09-24T06:43:52.673-07:002014-09-24T06:43:52.673-07:00both of y'all are too freaking sweet!
BUT KIK...both of y'all are too freaking sweet! <br />BUT KIKI this was seriously just awesome. i really, really can't wait to see where the story goes!Amyhttp://www.takingstepshome.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-49636998607497844372014-09-24T06:42:51.193-07:002014-09-24T06:42:51.193-07:00shut. the. front. door.
she is pregnant?! wait lik...shut. the. front. door.<br />she is pregnant?! wait like in real life or she just let it slip out to deter him from flirting.<br />TWIST TWIST.<br />and that plot development is spot on - all the details about his mom and the smile at the flight attendant...GAH just so freaking good kiki!Amyhttp://www.takingstepshome.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-64361027695397127112014-09-23T17:58:18.349-07:002014-09-23T17:58:18.349-07:00Aw, thanks!!! This cooler weather has me begging f...Aw, thanks!!! This cooler weather has me begging for a couple hours of writing and I'm hoping I get a chance to keep writing this weekend. I honestly have NO idea where to take this story next (I mean, they can't sit on a plane the whole time, haha), so we'll see where it goes!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-46938247906869801572014-09-23T14:47:49.545-07:002014-09-23T14:47:49.545-07:00Eeeekkk!!! I want the next installment NOW!!! Ge...Eeeekkk!!! I want the next installment NOW!!! Get on it, girlie! ;-)Susannahhttp://www.simplemomentsstick.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-6233889196682700862014-09-22T19:31:01.951-07:002014-09-22T19:31:01.951-07:00I'm so flattered that you consider this a good...I'm so flattered that you consider this a good Saturday morning read! :) I'm excited to hear your thoughts on it! :) And yes, you should go catch up on Amy's fiction pieces, too. That girl is amaaaaazing when it comes to fiction!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-36553391400395603702014-09-22T19:30:15.304-07:002014-09-22T19:30:15.304-07:00Yay, thanks Amanda! I cannot wait to write more! :...Yay, thanks Amanda! I cannot wait to write more! :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-80559067449173190812014-09-22T19:30:02.127-07:002014-09-22T19:30:02.127-07:00That last bit was definitely a last-minute change ...That last bit was definitely a last-minute change in the storyline. But I think it's a new storyline for me and I'm going to see where it takes me (and Liza!). :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-50197166472878525632014-09-22T19:29:30.543-07:002014-09-22T19:29:30.543-07:00Yay, I'm glad you read them all! I love it whe...Yay, I'm glad you read them all! I love it when the fiction bug bites, too. It's always a good bug bite, haha. :)<br /><br /><br />And I'm dying to find out what happens as well! Jeremy is the friendly Australian, Liza is definitely mysterious (and it wasn't on purpose!) and that crossword man is well, just another random person on the plane. Who knows, maybe he'll become a main character? :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-10835915998332921192014-09-22T19:28:04.392-07:002014-09-22T19:28:04.392-07:00I need to write more then! I'm hoping I get a ...I need to write more then! I'm hoping I get a chance to this weekend because the weather has been cooling down and it just screams writing time!Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-39054058206624015552014-09-22T19:27:40.965-07:002014-09-22T19:27:40.965-07:00You know, it's always been a dream of mine to ...You know, it's always been a dream of mine to write/publish a book! But I don't really have the mindset to sit down and continue a storyline. I have a terrible habit of starting stories and then never finishing them (knock on wood!). :)Kikihttp://www.initstimeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-12000875956658625252014-09-22T16:49:46.603-07:002014-09-22T16:49:46.603-07:00I have so much catching up to do. I think this is ...I have so much catching up to do. I think this is going to be a good Saturday morning read for me. I'm already getting excited about it. A cup of coffee, a snuggly dog, and fiction by Kiki on my iPad...which reminds me, I have a lot of catching up to do on Amy's fiction installments as well!Christina Conradhttp://www.christinaelyse.com/journal/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-58963052049801647962014-09-22T14:16:35.311-07:002014-09-22T14:16:35.311-07:00I am hooked and can't wait to read more!! You ...I am hooked and can't wait to read more!! You sure do have talent :)Amanda G.http://amgray18.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-85474401204529401292014-09-22T08:18:06.758-07:002014-09-22T08:18:06.758-07:00She is?? I hope you do stick to posting these, lo...She is?? I hope you do stick to posting these, lol!Kelly Del Vallehttp://www.kellydelvalle.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-16475480677376748182014-09-22T08:11:40.736-07:002014-09-22T08:11:40.736-07:00Okay...I just read parts 1, 2, AND three!!! I love...Okay...I just read parts 1, 2, AND three!!! I love it when the fiction bug bites. :) <br /><br />This is really good and I'm DYING to know more about the mysterious Liza and the friendly (Australian?!?!) Jeremy and even the crossword playing/sleeping old man two seats over!!! Keep writing. :)Victoriahttp://myjourneyforhim.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7858077928947631725.post-30259940103390700072014-09-22T04:04:01.413-07:002014-09-22T04:04:01.413-07:00So.... when are you going to publish your first bo...So.... when are you going to publish your first book? ;)meg pittshttp://www.mewiththethree.com/noreply@blogger.com